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'短文改错复习课件 短文改错（一）Lastweekendwewentmountain－climbing.Eventheheavyraininthemorningcouldnotpreventusgo.Settingoffveryearly,wewentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirits.Oneverysideoftheroadweregreenfieldsandsomefarmhouse.Wecouldhearthesoundoftherainandourfootstepsmixingwithourlaughter.Atnoonwereachedtopofthemountain.Thatsurprisedusmostwasthebeautyofthescenesthere.Afterhavingashortrestandsharingwiththefoodwehadbrought,westartedgoingdown.Itrainedevenharder.Wearewettotheskin,andwestillsangandlaughedhappily. Lastweekendwewentmountain－climbing.Eventheheavyraininthemorningcouldnotpreventusgo.Settingoffveryearly,wewentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirits.Oneverysideoftheroadweregreenfieldsandsomefarmhouse.goingextremelyeach/eitherhouses 短文改错主要困难1.找不出错误；2.操作不规范（答题不合要求）。 【改错策略】综观全文通文意，瞻前顾后看时态；见到谓语找主语，主谓一致找状语；见到名词想单复，是否可数要牢记；见到代词找指代，指代通常不合理；见到平行看结构，形式功能要对称；冠词词性主被动，固定搭配要熟记；名从定从与状从，引词作用须搞清；andbutor或so，逻辑关系要理顺；句中谓语就一个,其余动词非谓语；-ing表主动/性质,-ed形式表被动/状态，目的要用不定式。 形式变但规律没有变1.动词出现的错误（2-4）2.形容词与副词的误用(1)3.连词、从句的误用(1-2)4.一致问题（主谓/代词/前后）5.冠词的误用/少用/多用(1-2)6.名词的单复数(1)7.代词的误用(1-2)8.介词的错误(1-2) 动词形，名词数还要注意形和副非谓语，细辨别介词、短语要牢记ALimerick代词格，细领悟句子成分多分析冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注 短文改错应注意的问题四不改:①标点符号不改。②大小写不改。③词序错误不改。④单词拼写不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。Don"tforget! 1.冠词:多(少,错)冠词1）泛指(a/an)、特指(the)2)固定短语搭配in___hurryat___lossas___result;allof___sudden;on___contrary;in___wordanumberof与thenumberof区别adistanceofin___distanceapopulationof13billion;thepopulationofChina 2.代词1）主宾格错误:he/him;she/her；we/us;they/them2）人称指代不一致:we/you/they3）性别错误:he/she;him/her4）单复数不一致：my/our;I/we5）物主代词my/mine;you/yours;their/theirs6）反身代词：myself;ourselves;yourself;yourselves;himself;themselves7）多或少it等 3.It的用法1.形式宾语1)Sbfind/think/feel___+adj+todosth2)Sbtake___forgrantedthat…Butalltoooften,somechildrenjusttakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsshouldservethemunconditionally.2.形式主语___is+adj+for/ofsbtodosth3.Iwouldappreciate__ifyoucoulddosth4.Ilike/hate___when…… 4.并列谓语，并列宾语形式一致Helikesreadingbooks,collectstampsandlisteningtomusic.2.Besides,hespentalotoftimelyingonthesofaanddoinglittleexercise.collectingdid 5.谓语动词1）时态语态错误；IwatchTVuntil12o"clock,soIcouldnotgoovermylessons.……andalltheeyesfixeduponme.SomethingevenworsewashappenedtomeinEnglishclass.∧were＼watched 6.非谓语动词2）分词错误-ing,-edWecouldhearthesoundoftherainandourfootstepsmixingwithourlaughter.I’m19andastudentmajoredinEnglishatSouthChinaNormalUniversity.3)动名词短语作主语、宾语，动词原形不能作主语、宾语；Istoodatmybenchwithoutdaretoraisemyheadmixedmajoringdaring 7.名词单复数错误,可数还是不可数1)oneof+复数名词ZhangYimouisoneofthebest-knowndirectorinChina.2)不可数名词progress,furniture,knowledge,information,luggage/baggage,equipment,money,practice,advicedirectors 8.介词:少/多/错介词。be___duty;___returnfor;payattention___;onbehalf___befaced___;beaddicted___;lookforward___;regardless___;inaddition___;thesame…___..besimilar___;instead___ 9.形容词，副词形容词和副词使用错误;级别错误1)Theteacherlookedatmewithhiscoldlyeyes.2)Settingoffveryearly,wewentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirits.3)Thetallestofthetwomenstandingthereismyuncle.tallercoldextremely 10.连词and,but,so,or之间互相改动Wewerewettotheskin,andwestillsangandlaughedhappily.2)so与such之间互相改动Youknownothingofsothings.Hemadesuchwonderfulaspeechthattheteacherpraisedhim.but 3）so与very之间互相改动(so…that…句型)ThismorningIgotupverylatethatIhadtogotoschoolwithoutbreakfastinahurry…4）so与because之间互相改动或只用一个5）although,though与but不同时连用,但是可以和yet或still连用。 11.that,what之间互相改动Ithinkthatyouneedisarightstudymethod.Thatwehavelearnedinbookscan’thavethesameeffectonusaswhatwehavelearnedthroughpractice. 12.that,which之间互相改动(定语从句中，特别是非限制性定语从句）Enteringourschool,youcanseeafive–floorteachingbuilding,infrontofthataredifferentkindsofflowers.Moreandmorepeoplebuytheirprivatecars,thatcausesmoretrafficjams.ThefirstbookwhichIreadtodaywasanEnglishnovel.which 13.what与how之间互相改动1）感叹句中引导词HowaterribledayIhad!2)Idon’tknow___todonext.Idon’tknow___todoit.Idon’tknow___todealwith…Idon’tknow___todowith…3)Youwanttoknow___isgoingoninourschool.what 14.主谓一致1)Drivingcarsallthetimewithoutanyexercisedoharmtoone’shealth.2)WritingstoriesandarticlesiswhatIlikemost.(∨) 15.When与while相互改动1)Iwasabouttojumpintotheriverwhilesomeoneshoutedtome……2)Ihadjustgonetobedwhenthetelephonerang.(×)(∨) 16.固定搭配Sbwas/weredoingsth___……(did)Sbwas/wereabouttodosth___……Sbwas/wereonthepointofdoingsthSbhadjustdonesth___…….Itisthreedays___+句子()Itwasthreedays___+句子()Itwillbethreedays___+句子()Itwasat4_____Iwenthome.Itwas4_____Iwenthome. 17.易混词之间互相改动hard与hardly区别near与nearly区别farther与further区别deep与deeply区别if与whether区别beside与besides区别workhard与hardwork与hard-working 18.及物动词与不及物动词1)arriveat/inaplace(vi)reachaplace(vt)2)enteraroom=come/gointoaroom 19.重复错误Ihadtoreturnbacktothestoretolookformypurse.(×)＼return1)come/goback2)givebackrepeat不合againfavorite不合mostenter不加into 20.不定式:多或少to1)make/let/havesb___sth2)see/find/noticesb___sthobserve/watch/hearsbdosth3)havenochoicebut___sthcandonothingbut___sthdon’thaveanychoicebut___sthThere’snothingtodobut___sth4)doall/everything/whatonecan___sth5)WhatIwanttodois(to)dosth 21.it,there之间互相改动1)Itisnouse/useless/nogood___sthItisawasteoftime___sth2)___isnoneedforsbtodosth___isnopoint/sense(in)doingsth3)___isnowonderthat___isnodoubtthat___arechancesthat 22.Therebe句式Therewillhave40expertsattendtheconference.（×）Therewillbe40expertsattendingtheconference.()However,therearestillmanychildrenhatedfruitandvegetables.(×)However,therearestillmanychildrenhating/whohatefruitandvegetables.()∨∨ 23.be,have之间互相改动Therewillhave……()Therebe+n+do/didsth()Therebe+n+doing……（）Therebe+n+who/that…（）（×）（×）∨∨ 24.as与like区别；as与with区别1.thesame(…)as…2.like像…一样asateacher作为…Heisverysuccessful____ateacher.3.Withtheexam______(come),youmustbepreparedforit.=Astheexam______(come),4._____theenvironmentgettingworseandworse,itisourresponsibilitytolivealow-carbonlifestyletoprotecttheearth. 25.them,whom,which之间互相改动1.Ipickeduptheapples,someofthemwerebad.2.Recently,lotsofpeopledrownedwhenenjoyingthemselvesinwater,someofthemwerestudents.whichwhom 26.关联词not…but…either…or…neither…nor…Notonly…but(also)…Weshouldnotonlyrespectthedisabledbuthelpthemineverypossibleway.(∨) 27.good与well之间互相改动Theysellbooksasgoodasnewspapers.I’mnotfeelingverygoodtoday.well(×)well 28.插入语____one’sopinionbelieveit____信不信由你____behonest____thetruthtomakeitshorttomakealongstoryshortinshort=inawordinotherwords Homework:Finishthepaper.Reciteallofthepointsmentionedabove. Thankyouforlistening.GoodLuck!Bye_bye 短文改错（一）【答案】1.第2句go→going2.第3句extreme→extremely3.第4句every→each/either4.第4句house→houses5.第5句mixing→mixed6.第6句top前加the7.第7句That→What8.第8句去掉with9.第10句are→were10.第10句and→but 短文改错（二）【答案】1.第1句watch→watched2.第2句very→so3.第2句in后加a4.第3句explain→explaining5．第3句fixed前加were6.第5句去掉was7.第6句speak→say8.第7句coldly→cold9.第8句dare→daring10.第9句How→What 短文改错(三）Itwasfineyesterdayandthesunwasshininginsky.Iwentboatingbymyself.Ididn"ttakesomefriendswithmebecauseIwantedtobelonely.Ihiredaboatandrowedslowlyinthecenterofthelake.Afreshbreezewasblowing,fisheswereswimmingandbirdsweresinging.WhenIreachedtothecenter,Itookupthepaddlesandlieddownintheboat.Withtheblueskyovermeandgreenwateraroundme,Iwasextremelyrelaxing.OvertwohourspassedwhenIknewit.Icamebackhomeverylately,butIdidn"tfeeltiredatall,forIhadreallyhadagoodtime. 短文改错(三）【答案】1.第1句sky前加the2.第3句some→any3.第3句lonely→alone4.第4句in→to5.第5句fishes→fish6.第6句去掉to7.第6句lied→lay8.第7句relaxing→relaxed9.第8句when→before10.第9句lately→late 短文改错（四）Thatwasabouteleveno"clockinthemorning.Iwasinmywaytotheoffice,andIwaswalkingdowntheEastStreet.SuddenlyIsawacarcomeveryfast.Whentheredlightwasoff,thedriverwantedtostopbutshecouldnot.Thecarhitagainstthewallofabuilding,andshewasbadhurt.Iquicklycalledthepolice.Thepolicecarcamesoon.Apolicemanhadhelpedthedriveroutofthecar,andtookhimtohospital.Anotherpolicemanwentuptomeandaskedmeabouttheaccident.Ihopedthedriverwouldmorecarefulwhendrivinginthefuture. 短文改错（四）【答案】1.第1句That→It2.第2句in→on3.第3句come→coming4.第4句off→on5.第5句去掉against6．第5句bad→badly7.第7句The→A8.第8句去掉had9．第8句him→her10.第10句would后加be 短文改错（五）DearSusan，I"mverygladlytohearyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwon"tbeabletomeetyouattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.Youwon"tfinddifficulttogettothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheFriendshipHotel.MyclasseswillbeoverbythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoutogethertoahotpotrestaurantfordinnerandwe"lltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.HavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.Yours，ZhangMing 短文改错（五）【答案】1.第1句gladly→glad2.第1句去掉the3.第2句although→because/as4.第3句find后加it5．第4句minute→minutes6.第4句rightly→right7.第5句or→and8.第6句去掉together9.第6句with→about10.第7句Having→Have 短文改错(六）Whatshouldyoudowhenyourparentsbecomeangrily?Ifyourparentsgotmad,trytohaveaconversationwiththemaboutit.Rememberingnottoshoutatthem.Theyusuallywilltrytochange.Buttheywilltakesometimestochangebecausetheyalwaysgetangry,andthatisalltheyknow.Youmighthavetochangeforyourmethodacoupleoftimes.Doanynicethingsforyourparentsthattheydon"texpect—likecooking,doingthedishes,washingclothes,orcleanthefloors.Ifthisdoesn"twork,bringinfriendthatyoufeelcomfortable,andhavehimorherhelpyou 短文改错(六）【答案】1.第1句angrily→angry2.第2句got→get3.第3句Remembering→Remember4.第5句第1个they→it5.第5句times→time6.第6句去掉for7.第7句any→some8.第7句clean→cleaning9.第8句friend前加a10．第8句comfortable后加with 短文改错（七）DearEditor，I"mwritingtotellyouaboutafoodpoisoningaccident.Severaldaysago,myneighborateabagoffoodbuyingfromthemarket.Afterthemeal,theyhadstomachachesandtheirfacesturnpale.Fortunately,oneoftheirfriendsfoundtheaccidentandimmediatelycalledonanambulance,whichcarriedthemquicklytoahospital.Afterseveralhours"treatmenttheyfinallyescapedfromdeath.Assomeillegalbusinessmenonlyinterestedinmakingprofitstobecomerichquickly,weseldomcareaboutthenecessarysafetymeasuresorcarewhichhappenstoconsumers.Theymustbechargedwithlaw.Meanwhile,Idohopewholesocietycanrealizetheimportantoffoodsafetyandbegintakingactiontogethertomakesurefoodissafe.Yours,WangMing 短文改错（七）【答案】1.第2句neighbor→neighbors2.第2句buying→bought3.第3句turn→turned4.第4句去掉on5．第6句only前加are6.第6句we→they7.第6句which→what8.第7句with→by9.第8句whole前加the/our10．第8句important→importance 短文改错（八）GrandmaMoseswascrazyaboutpaintingsoonbeforeshepickeditupandworkedhardatit.Shepaintedcarefulandherworkswerenice.Shefirstpaintedonlytopleaseoneself,andthenbegantosellherworkswithalittlemoney.In1993,acollector,LouisCaldorhappentoseeseveralofGrandmaMoses"workhanginginashop.Helikedthem,buyingthematonce,andsetouttolookforless.CaldorheldashowtointroducetheworksofGrandmaMosesotherartists.GrandmaMoses,whowasworld－famous,wasdiedonDecember13,1961,attheageof101. 短文改错（八）【答案】1.第1句before→after2.第2句careful→carefully3.第3句oneself→herself4.第3句with→for5.第4句happen→happened6.第4句work→works7.第5句buying→bought8.第5句less→more9.第6句other前加to10.第7句去掉was 方法：1.培养从文章整体入手改错的习惯，掌握联系文章上下文的方法（确定时态——现在时或过去时）。2.掌握正确的改错方法。1）尊重原文意思，揣摩出题者的意图，勿只考虑语法正确Ithinkthatyouneedisarightstudymethod.2）先考虑改为主，再考虑去或加what(不是去is) 晏子使楚 从这以后，楚王（）。在这之前，楚王（）。出使时，晏子（）。 三个故事宴会上刚到城门拜见楚王 这个是狗洞，不是城门，只有访问“狗国”，才从狗洞钻进去，所以楚国是（），结果（）。 我是最下等人，访问楚国。所以楚国是（），结果（）。 淮南自然条件好，产柑橘。淮北自然条件差，产枳橘。齐国人在齐国安居乐业，在楚国当强盗。所以楚国是（）。结果（）。 不会尊重别人的人，别人也不会尊重他。——席勒'